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i'm so tired
of being me.

I want something different
to feed my reckless need.

My hand reaches
for the razor
lieing on the table.

A drop hits the floor
and the razor just
wants more.

It bites deeper
craving the blood
that is now running,
flooding the ground
beneath my feet.

Everythings in slow motion
and my hearts slowing down.
I can hear each beat
as i crash down.

I watch the razor spin
as it ricoshays off the tile,
that's crimson from the blood,
that just wouldn't stop screaming
to become my personal flood.

"Aren't you proud mother?" goes through
my mind...as my mom walks
in on my morbid crime.
©2007-2009 ~DefeatedThoughts
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eh...

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:icondeadsomething:
shit, i shouldn't have read anything after drinking now... everything was right, until i went through my devwatch...
shit, i should've known i would've be triggered... :(

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"cannot the kingdom of salvation take me home?"
I am member of the *Self-InjuryClub
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=(

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Your just out to break my heart. </3

And the rain fell. falling, it was rain, but having fallen, it was blood. -edgar allen poe-
:icontearzsting:
Very vivid...I can dig it.

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~*~*Scarlet tears and crimson regret rain down from what might have been*~*~
:icondefeatedthoughts:
thanks.

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Your just out to break my heart. </3

And the rain fell. falling, it was rain, but having fallen, it was blood. -edgar allen poe-
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I really like this! Especially the ending, it really resonated with me, esp since my mum's walked in on me before as well. Just a few edits need to be made:
Line 7: lying
Line 17: heart's
Line 21: Ricochets
Great work!!

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Letters from Dalila [link]
:icondefeatedthoughts:
thank you! for the edits! omg i didnt have a dictionary and i didnt have any CLUE how to spell ricochets lmao. and thank you also for the others. =D

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Your just out to break my heart. </3

And the rain fell. falling, it was rain, but having fallen, it was blood. -edgar allen poe-
:iconquietlyinsane:
:(

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No. Try not. Do... or do not. There is no try.

Please come to my gallery :gallery: [link] you never know, you may see something you like.
:icondefeatedthoughts:
me sawees....=(

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Your just out to break my heart. </3

And the rain fell. falling, it was rain, but having fallen, it was blood. -edgar allen poe-
:iconquietlyinsane:
there is no need to be sorry, I just dont want to think about bad things happening to you.

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No. Try not. Do... or do not. There is no try.

Please come to my gallery :gallery: [link] you never know, you may see something you like.

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